Wii Challenge | WhiteGuardian | Vina the Dragon Girl

[WhiteGuardian]

Wii Challenge | WhiteGuardian | Vina the Dragon Girl
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WhiteGuardian has entered the competition!

[WhiteGuardian]

Here some concepts that i made last night.
Please help me to chose which one is the best

[WhiteGuardian]

The 2nd version

[WhiteGuardian]

The 3rd Version

[WhiteGuardian]

The 4th version :)

[Japhir]

wow great improvement there! i like the shapes a lot!

[FredH]

I think you have something here, but it still needs a little refinement. I think once you are comfortable with which features you will have on her, all that needs doing is to modify her proportions until you find something pleasing. Right now, her large feet outweighs her short arms, and in some images, her hands seem too small when compared with the rest of her enlargened areas.

Also, in your last image, a dragon limb on a child looks kind of evil and painful so I kind of like the one before the last one. In that one, she looks like she was born as a half dragon and half human, so I don't see any pain and suffering.

Aside from this, good explorations thus far!:) Looking forward to seeing more:thumb:

[katana]

I like the third one the best...the first one the wings are so large and noisy (detailed) the girl is lost. The second one the gun she is holding takes away from her face...with out the gun and seen in her classic pose...shes a keeper...and yep, I agree...early in the comp you've got plenty of time to clean up and refine....nice

[bakpao]

nice character dude.
I like the first one.. the one with the tail.. damn that's so cool ^ ^

[sage]

I liked the idea , but the dragon legs I think need to be more refined and less brutish. Not sure if that makes sense. Maybe they would look better if they were more slender and more curvy and more feminine.

Alex

[Dario]

i would like to know more about where you want to go with this concept.
combining a dragon with a little girl seems like an interesting challenge, but it would help you to know what made here a dragongirl and what she is fighting for. and finally it would help us to let you know what may fit to that idea or not.

so far i like the third sketch most, because it trys to combine those elements instead of glueing them together like in the other sketches. maybe going step by step - from anatomy to finally clothing - would help you to explore the character in a more effective way.

[Rayartz]

I like this concept.
I think it would be cool if she was basically just a girl but could change parts her body into a dragon at will. For example, she wants to fly she grows wings, she wants to bite somebody she turns an arm into a dragon head like you have drawn.
I really don't know how you'd convey that in a one shot concept rendering. But I think it'd be cool for a game.
Keep playing around though we've got lots of time!

[devil999]

haha White i just can give u more supports.. keep improve man.looks I like the girl with the wings.. make it more detail and cute dude.. go for it.

[WhiteGuardian]

Japhir
Thx a lot
FredH
Thx for your feedback. I got idea to fix it
katana
Hehe. For no 2, the gun is inspired by a mixer. Thx
bakpao
Thx. I like no 1 too.
sage
More feminime ? She just a kid. Hehe....
Dario
Thx for your feeback. I have create the story of this character.
Rayartz
Thx for the tips. I've same idea like you said about change parts of her body.
devil999
Thx

[WhiteGuardian]

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t181/Whiteguardian_bucket/Dragon-War_resize.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t181/Whiteguardian_bucket/TheLastDragonVinasParent_resize-1.jpg
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t181/Whiteguardian_bucket/Fusion_resize-1.jpg
This story tells about Vina, a little girl. In her body, is veiled a dragon which is the last dragon in a few last periode as the residue of war. At that time, human clan joined with the dragon clan which have against alien power that want to dominate the world. That fighting called as Dragon War. The dragon clan have 9 dragons. The war is winned by clan from the earth, but made a lot of destructions. Even there was only one dragon and staying alive. This last dragon looked for a human, young generation as the next leader when it just had a little bit power. It must do to have a new generation cause it can't be keep power and stay alive in its original shape. Also he can't do Redragonetion (The highest skill in dragon clan that able to resurect dragon). He hope the human can be a leader of dragon clan, able to do Redragonetion and able to protect the earth.

On her age, twelve years old, Vina growth to be a strong and healthy girl. Physically, she looked like another human child, but she had a higher skils than another human. The ability of sight, listening and the body stamina are also more than human standard

Her parents are warriors and have enough fighting skill. They taught their beloved girl. Her father made a sword for her and her mother designed clothes for her.

All her body parts can be changed like dragon which depend on its needs. If she wanted to jumping into higher place, she change her feet as dragon feet. These dragon feet was very strong to kick and have a good power to defense.

Vina finally realize that because the action of the last dragon to fuse to her body, it open the seal of a great evil power in the earth. Now the earth in the danger condition. This is also her mission. Not only to resurect dragon, but have to save her world from the evil power.

[WhiteGuardian]

Here the concept design for the character

[WhiteGuardian]

This is my modelling sheet. Still have 1 week before the deadline. :brick:

[WhiteGuardian]

Here the initial sketch. 3 days more. Hope everybody finished your entry :)

[WhiteGuardian]

Here my final pose progress. Really need comments and critics please. :)

[sage]

Looks really nice. I would like to play a game that had this character.

Alex

[Dark Martian]

Time to crit it. Let's see.....you have a strong compostition. Everything has personality to it from the girl to all of the dragons. Perhaps some more clarification of a background. It's awfully blurry. I am just nit picking. It's definitely a strong piece. Great story as well, it's very fleshed out.

[WhiteGuardian]

Thx a lot for the feedback Dark Martian. I will refix the story to be more clearly. :)

[WhiteGuardian]

Here the final pose, ups i meant the winning pose.
This is when Vina able to do Redragonation. She could resurrect 8 dragons and her body got changed to Dragon Form. With Wing of Light that can make her fly and Dragon Armor/skin cover her body. Her sword got changed to be more bigger and more powerful.
Her length is 150% taller than her human form.
I put her surrounded by 8 dragons and she make a flame by using her left hand (like to pick a lighter..hehe)

This early month make me crazy. Wii challenge and Wrestler challenge in this forum have a same deadline. :brick: :brick: Wow....but that me make very interesting with this forum. I love it. Thx a lot for FredH and Blanktajoe. :)

[Dark Martian]

It's brilliant White Guardian, it's beautiful.

[WhiteGuardian]

Dark Martian
Thx Dark Martian. :)

[WhiteGuardian]

I try to make some of gameplay of Vina the Dragon Girl in RPG style.
I got much influences by game of Castlevania Symphony of the Night and other game like Kingdom Heart or other RPG game.

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t181/Whiteguardian_bucket/DemoGameplay1.jpg

Gameplay 1
Vina in Normal Form using sword technique to hit the enemy. That action using her MP. Each time she hit enemy, the LP of enemy will show up.
LP= Life Point
MP= Magic Point
DP= Dragon Point

A bar surround her face icon is a Limit Bar, as much enemy that she hit, as much point of limit that she gain. If the limit bar is full, she can be using Limit technique

In the right upper is a radar of characters position, blue icon is her position and red icons is enemy position.

http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t181/Whiteguardian_bucket/DemoGameplay2.jpg

Gameplay 2
Vina in Change Form. She using Dragon Kick technique to hit the enemies. That action using her DP and everytime she using DP. Her face icon change to be Dragon/Lung icon (Text in Chinese language). DP can be recover automatically everytime she doesn't use it.

[WhiteGuardian]

Looks really nice. I would like to play a game that had this character.

Alex

Sorry late to reply your comment.
Thx a lot. I've try to make it real ( i mean i try to make the gameplay).
For a long time ago, i've a dream that one day i will make a video game. RPG the most i love. :)