Mob Thug (Image dump)

[mindflip]

hey guys,

first post. been working on this guy for a while and am currently about done with the low poly geo. will have updates for that phase soon. c&c welcome.

http://www.ent3d.com/thug_mug.jpg

http://www.ent3d.com/thug_mug_01.jpg

http://www.ent3d.com/thug_body.jpg

http://www.ent3d.com/thug_body_01.jpg

http://www.ent3d.com/thug_body_02.jpg

http://www.ent3d.com/thug_hand.jpg

[Spark]

Hey mindflip, this guy is looking really good. Curious to how his profile looks, as he feels like he needs a really strong jaw, as he has alot of attitude. I know your still working on this, so the areas like the ear and the shirt and collar area will probably be tightened, but otherwise great piece.

Spark
www.bbriley.com

[cookepuss]

Looks pretty good. The texturing of the face seem a little odd. The details seem too big to be pores, but too small and not lumpy enough to be pock marks or acne scars. Other than that, I think that he looks good. Not sure about the length of the arms in relation to the mid-section and crotch. I'm thinking that either his mid-section is a little too long (riding low in the crotch area) or his arms might be too short. That's just from my eyeballing of things though. I could be wrong.

[kirilot]

if this is the same model im thinking of ....stellar improvement :thumbs:
love the moles

[Ramseus]

Stellar indeed. His head seems a little big to me, could just be me though.

[Sir Rodriguez]

this is sweet. looking good. especially the clothing on this guy.

[mindflip]

hey, haven't been able to work on stuff/reply lately due to some jackass hijacking my system to mass mail. anyway, hope to get back to work soon.

Spark, thanks, will get a profile render up sometime soon. more minions please:)

cookepuss, yeah, it's something i toss around back and forth as well. can be a tough balance between idealized proportions and naturalism. remember that his crotch is actually higher than the pants would indicate, leaving some room for his teste sachal to hang freely.:p

kirilot, yeah i guess i learned not to post my work too early, though i'm not sure i would have had the same fuel had i not. thanks for the comments.

Ramseus, will check the head, thanks.

Sir Rodriguez, thanks, definitely put the most energy into the clothing.

[onelung]

Really like where this is going. Good crits so far, only thing i can add, is that the T shirt has some lose folds up top, but a tight go in at the belt and from the front makes him feel like he's got a small beer belly (from the tightness, where maybe the shirt would actually have more bagginess, if that baggy at the top).

looking forward to the update!

[MM]

nice modeling you have here. looks clean and consistent. the anatomy features look good too but i think you can push them a bit further since lot of it gets lost after adding color map and baking normals etc.
i think the hands look a little big and his torso looks a little small. this makes him look slightly short to me. may be make his head a tad bit smaller too as Ramseus mentioned.