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Blk Biscuit
02-25-2008, 10:56 AM
Dominance War III | Blk Biscuit | untitled
http://www.gameartisans.org/contests/events/uploaded_thubnails/38-game-concept-art-4619-1203935458-thumb.jpg

Good luck to everyone!

Here are my initial thumbnails. I'm doing the invoker, still haven't decided whether or not i want the artifact weapon to be Water Based, Darkness/Void, or a Summon. I'm leaning more towards Water. Crits and Comments Welcome.

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/3549/aaronholleyssilhouettesmf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1935/aaronholleysthumbnails1pb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5720/aaronholleysthumbnails2lk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2120/aaronholleysthumbnails3at4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1147/aaronholleysthumbnails4uf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/8908/aaronholleysthumbnails5ap1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



I decided to go with # 4B

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/7364/aaronholley1te4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

los
02-25-2008, 01:38 PM
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v235/losmm/doggie.jpg

SgtJoesphCrack
02-25-2008, 01:59 PM
Haha Los thats awesome. Yea I think you should totally go with the pugg face.
nice entry. I prefer number 17 but it seems you've already chosen your guy. GLHF:thumb:

OrganizedChaos
02-25-2008, 11:00 PM
Holy crap you've got these ocean-like designs down. I love these sketches and the one you picked is going to be great to see in 3d if you go through with it.
I'm surprised you haven't gotten many comments :\

antTON
02-25-2008, 11:42 PM
a lot of great thumbs, pal. really great work! 4C is the one i like the most at this moment. I see somekind of ocean queen in it - elegant and horrible! :)

Kerepres
02-26-2008, 07:33 PM
lol, love the pug face.
Anyway, once I saw the creature I could imagine in in the war field.
Pretty amazing design, I personally like 15 but if you put those two together and fight, I'd feel that 4B is much more dangerous looking. Would love to see it in color.:thumb:

Blk Biscuit
02-26-2008, 10:31 PM
LMAO....Thanks Los, thats it you've figured out the missing link....pure genius you are...lol

SgtJoesphCrack, OrganizedChaos, antTON, Kerepres Thanks guys for the crits and comments..

Ya I had a tough time trying to decide which ones I wanted to do b/c I also like 4A, 4C, 15, and 17...

Now that I've had a couple of days to think about it I am going to take some of these to the next level....Anybody that has any favorites out of those thumbs I would appreciate any feedback...Thanks

OrganizedChaos
02-26-2008, 11:52 PM
I swear I replied to this... if I don't see my comment tomorrow I guess I'll rewrite it

OrganizedChaos
02-28-2008, 11:57 AM
Alright- well, here's my input.
I really like the nautilus/tentacles mainly because I haven't seen them anywhere else in such an extreme and interesting manner. If you go with the shell, I'd like to see what you would end up doing with it (texture, shape, color)
I really like 15 but it reminds me a little of
http://www.trinity3d.com/images/gnomon/creature_modeling_production/example1.jpg

Out of the 4's, I like B the most, and numbers 1, 5C, and 17
You really did do a ton of great thumbnails, I'd imagine it would be pretty difficult to choose.

Blk Biscuit
02-29-2008, 04:29 AM
Here's an update on my progress I just wanted to flesh out some of the details of 4B...before working on to the other thumbs...

http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/2940/aaronholleydominancewarof8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Close Up

http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/2387/aaronholleydominancewaryd4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


Organized Chaos....Thanks man for the input and comments....that is an awesome concept...Ya I posted a comment on yours the other day as well and I wasn't seeing it up there.

I sent a message to the webmaster...apparently they lost any info that had been posted within that 24 hour period ...but he said not to worry, that it won't happen again....so ya ...I need to rewrite what i posted for your work as well Thanks again.

facosta
02-29-2008, 11:00 AM
Very nice silhouette studies and thumbs. I really like how it's turning out. Keep it up!!!

JeremyK
02-29-2008, 12:48 PM
That looks awesome. I think that's a good decision to go 4B. Are you planning to have something crazy for the tentacles/legs? I think the tentacles/legs on the sketch look really cool because they look like humans attached to the end of them (you can kinda see the arms, heads, spines, etc.)

SpikeCB
02-29-2008, 12:53 PM
great stuff you got there :thumb:
It looks pretty scary.
I guess I will stop eating calamari rings then :s
Do you already know what this creature is going to use as a weapon ?
In my opinion he should get a huge trident like weapon.

Amethyst
03-01-2008, 09:52 AM
Fantastic drawings... more, more

alanis1020
03-01-2008, 05:55 PM
cool ! i like it!!!

Blk Biscuit
03-01-2008, 07:31 PM
facosta, silent_fox, SpikeCB, Amethyst, alanis1020 Thank you for all the kind words and suggestions

silent_fox..ya they will most likely be octopus arms w/ tentacles for the legs...but that might change slightly ...not 100% sure...I Def. like the direction of it now its just a matter of tinkering with the details.....that was pretty cool that you saw that from the sketch...wasn't what I was intending but I like it ...it sounds creepy envisioning it anyways...that idea was something I was thinking for sketch #1 actually...any how Thanks again


SpikeCB Ya I was planning on doing some sort of Trident with the artifact in it ....but I want to play around with some ideas to see if I come up with something different...

I loosely painted these guys up just to get a better feel for them...I like them along with all of the other sketches...
(I am just going to paint them up later though for my portfolio)...but for this competition, I am going to stick with 4B just going to start working out the details of her armor, weapon(s) and all of that fun stuff...

http://img211.imageshack.us/img211/1152/aaronholleydominancewarfa2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/6410/aaronholleydominancewarfi6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Kuroart
03-01-2008, 07:48 PM
lookin great so far. keep it going.

julianV
03-01-2008, 08:23 PM
love what you've got going so far for your 4B concept. looking pretty needo.

Ketka
03-03-2008, 05:04 PM
very interesting research. I like this one (http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/7364/aaronholley1te4.jpg)
good luck!

Nscarlet
03-03-2008, 05:17 PM
Great Stuff.
4B looks wicked!
Excited to see the weapon ideas and armor.

WhiteGuardian
03-03-2008, 06:17 PM
Look awesome.

lone wolf
03-03-2008, 07:17 PM
Marvelous work ! :thumb:
I'd prefer 4C with the combination of extra hand-like tentacles from 4B...
Great paintings man.. :D
Btw, regarding the close-up looks on the face on 4B, I'm not seeing a mouth inside his face ? just merely tentacle-kinda mask ?

Blk Biscuit
03-17-2008, 09:15 AM
Kuroart, julianV, Ketka, Nscarlet, WhiteGuardian, lone wolf ....Thanks guys for the compliments

lone wolf...yaya thanks man ...ya I tweaked the face just a little ...originally my thinking was to not have a mouth but i think it needs something...


Here is some quick color studies and a piece a took a little further

http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/8622/aaronholleysdominancewawo4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/7448/aaronholleyquickrevisioza3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

ZDCoe
03-17-2008, 09:18 AM
Wow, I absolutely LOVE the textures in this, it's fantastic! I really like the mutated octopus design and the colors you're using, keep it up!

SgtJoesphCrack
03-17-2008, 06:10 PM
Dude Aaron you cant just take a picture of your mom :paper: and expect to win. lol jk. Its coming out great man, my only complaint is that its kinda difficult to make out whats going on in the face region of the character see if you cant do something to make it more clear perhaps using fewer tentacles on the face and making them larger would help. Keep up the good work.:thumb:

mango4you
03-19-2008, 03:21 PM
AMAZING JOB!!! I ACTUALLY MAKE COFFEE FOR A ARTIST!! Dominance War III | Blk Biscuit | untitled
http://www.gameartisans.org/contests/events/uploaded_thubnails/38-game-concept-art-4619-1203935458-thumb.jpg

Good luck to everyone!

Here are my initial thumbnails. I'm doing the invoker, still haven't decided whether or not i want the artifact weapon to be Water Based, Darkness/Void, or a Summon. I'm leaning more towards Water. Crits and Comments Welcome.

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/3549/aaronholleyssilhouettesmf4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1935/aaronholleysthumbnails1pb4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/5720/aaronholleysthumbnails2lk0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/2120/aaronholleysthumbnails3at4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/1147/aaronholleysthumbnails4uf3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/8908/aaronholleysthumbnails5ap1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)



I decided to go with # 4B

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/7364/aaronholley1te4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

:thumb: :thumb:

ZDCoe
03-19-2008, 03:59 PM
Wow - that's all I have to say

Blk Biscuit
03-20-2008, 01:40 AM
ZDCoe: Thanks man! I appreciate it.

SgtJoesphCrack: Thanks man...ya I still have a few things that I need to fix ....lol ...actually I was using los's mom for reference... but don't tell him that :)

mango4you: ....rofl...wow...Thanks Monica ...I thought I was on the wrong page for a sec. :)


I didn't have a chance to post these before so I thought I would post them anyways ....just some close ups

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/6117/aaronholleycloseup4kn3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/5494/aaronholleycloseup2wt2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/482/aaronholleycloseup3st5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Blk Biscuit
04-03-2008, 04:35 AM
Down to the last stretch....fun stuff ...It's pretty late my time so I'm going to try and make this quick....Here is my ortho ...I just need to do a few little minor tweaks to it and that's all set...and then the start of the character sheet...which I know I will need to change that format to the req. format...and some illustration thumbs....I didn't like her color..so I am scrapping that and the last illustration thumb is a rough idea of what I want to go with but it still needs some tweaking though and I am changing the format b/c I thought from reading some of the other posts that we had to have a square format...but I was wrong, just as long as its within the given 1000 by 1000...

http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/693/ahwiporthosiu6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/8089/ahwipcharactersheetap0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/8171/ahwipillustrationthumbski7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/3213/ahwipillustrationthumbsqp5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/3124/ahwipillustrationpossibjd2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

kw3k
04-03-2008, 07:41 AM
Hoooolly %$$(&^!! this is insane...
Superb artwork!!!
I really like what you did with the logo...cool!

Amethyst
04-03-2008, 08:51 AM
Wow, Incredible work! Beautiful colorcombinations. Top notch sketches. Can't wait to see your entry...:thumb: :)

ZDCoe
04-03-2008, 08:59 AM
I like sketches 4 & 8 the best

Blk Biscuit
04-09-2008, 11:08 PM
kw3k, Amethyst, ZDCoe Thanks guys I appreciate the comments and suggestions.

Well hopefully I should be finished with the Illustration sometime early this morning...:)...but so far here is some of my color thumbs and my WIP on the Illustration as of now...

I am going to put some kind of broken robot hand kind of floating/sinking down in the foreground there...something subtle to help with scale and there is also going to be dripping water off the tentacles as well....any suggestions or comments are always appreciated..

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/978/ahcolorthumbsfk9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/1847/ahillustrationwipul9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

Nether
04-10-2008, 03:45 AM
This has to be one of the weirdest octopus like bugger I've ever seen. Just marvelous work. I especially like the detailed modeling sheet. The final pose also looks very dynamic and has good strong dark colors.

ZDCoe
04-10-2008, 10:50 AM
Wow, this is looking awesome! I love the watery maelstrom swirling around him, the bubbles and light really set the watery feel - love it!

Nolaj
04-10-2008, 11:24 AM
Great monster. I really love the colors of his skin !

Blk Biscuit
04-12-2008, 12:08 AM
Finally finished!....Best of luck to everyone! Crits and Comments always welcome!

Nether, ZDCoe, Nolaj... Thanks guys I appreciate it!

http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/4296/aaronholleyswinningposecn0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/2905/aaronholleysmodelingshexs5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)


http://img262.imageshack.us/img262/2936/aaronholleysconceptsheedw2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

los
04-12-2008, 12:35 AM
Dude... Excellent execution my friend. Great pose and composition. Looks like all that time was well spent dude.
I really like the ortho's, they remind me of something you would find in some old scientific species book..
Congrats on the finish..

FredH
04-12-2008, 01:26 AM
Stellar final! And the little arm in the water was a great touch hehe

NuclearWarrior
04-12-2008, 02:27 AM
Congrats dude, really nice presentation overall. Really amazing job with the light coming from underwater. I also like how sharp his face is and how out of focus the background is behind the head. Whew! Now you can chill, he he.

Blk Biscuit
04-13-2008, 12:27 PM
los, FredH, NuclearWarrior - Thanks guys I appreciate the compliments... It is nice to be finished with it and be able to chill out now.

Soulsurvivor
04-13-2008, 01:27 PM
Great rendering dude, GL!

kw3k
04-13-2008, 09:40 PM
oooh wooowww...Sorry I can't comment...I really dunno what to say... just...Good luck...(even though I don't think you need that) great job.

MikiNohm
04-13-2008, 10:32 PM
Very awesome painting you've done :)

Blk Biscuit
04-17-2008, 11:41 PM
Soulsurvivor, kw3k, MikiNohm - Thanks guys for the complements I really appreciate it, there is a lot of great entries this year, should be interesting. It's cool to see this many people getting involved for sure.

Japhir
05-07-2008, 05:58 AM
wow great stuff! congrats on making the top 50! (you're not here :D (http://www.gameartisans.org/contests/events/3/announcement/2d-list.html))