Magery

[BluPanda]

http://www.nilesd.com/Private/mage_web.jpg

It's not "done" but its far enough that im taking a break from it. I just noticed before posting that i forgot to add all the jewelry and buckles... that would have helped for amount of detail i think. Anyway, its a concept for a model I hope to make sooner or later.

[FredH]

Looking really cool there. I really like the scruffy look of your background. It's a nice effect. The colors on her are cool too, but her legs seem somewhat short. Also, the red lights on her legs look a bit confusing since the glows on her back leg are not faded with the rest of the leg. This makes the glows look like they are floating around.

It's a shame you won't complete this one. It's shaping up nicely man.

[BluPanda]

o i meant break to mean like a day or 2 as apose to months, im working on it again, hopefully to have another update soon. Thanks for the suggestion with the red, i'm actually addressing it now. I'm thinking the helmet needs a spot more character to it as well.

[Rain]

Yeah, some eyes in there, suggestive or real, would make for some more personality. Also, if she is flying, you can use the cloth to suggest movement. Right now, she looks very stationary because her cloth is very limp. Don't be afraid to toss it all over the place, or even make an interesting flowing design with it. Hope you will keep pushing her to a finished piece because you have already made a good start. Good Luck