Naruto Challenge | god_gilaz | shikamaru

[god_gilaz]

Naruto Challenge | god_gilaz | shikamaru
http://www.gameartisans.org/contests/competitions/uploaded_thubnails/35-game-3d-art-1426-1189049818-thumb.jpg

god_gilaz has entered the competition!

[god_gilaz]

tough, but must try

[Eclipse]

Definitely one of my favorite characters in the series, I'm really looking forward to what you do with him.

[god_gilaz]

hi, this is my base model, still researching for better work:inocent:

[ylaya]

i think you should adding more poly on the shoulder, so it can bend nice later...and in my opinion u can reduce the polys on the torso, so you can saves some poly for other areas...but that's depend on the concept you about to make.cheers..good luck!!

[god_gilaz]

yo mr. necro, advice from senior is something got to pay attention to, i still have some poly budget to use, and i will use it wisely:lucky: :lucky: :lucky: :lucky: wont lose to you :lucky: :lucky:

[ALW-DaSilva]

wew...so ur join the challange too...hehee...cheers
hmmm graet modeling huh..keep it up dude...
waiting to ur next progress...

[god_gilaz]

this is the concept art.. thanks Al, looking for new challenge to meassure our level actually :lucky:

[god_gilaz]

hhhhhhhhh...... work is bundle, no time for my naruto hicksss.........

[god_gilaz]

hi, this new try, for the lighting scene.:lucky:

[hennypurwadi]

Nice concept, bro.
And nice model too....

[Chasarsis]

The modeling is so stiff! Loosen up his stance abit, give an arc to his legs and back, so that the model communicates a feeling of weight, and an element of that all important style :D

[god_gilaz]

hi.. yup thanks alot for the input.. pay more attention on it, especially from the senior, hehe i'll keep it up... nice tips from you, thanks, is a gud advice

[ylaya]

totally agreed with Chasarsis, looks too stiff, and i think you should focus on your model first, expends your 5000 tris or do the high poly, worried about lighting later....

[god_gilaz]

hi this my scuplt on shikamaru... i am new in Z-brush, so please guide me.

thanks for all critics they make me keep looking way to keep improving

[Marcus Dublin]

Good start god_gilaz The face and vest look like a solid so far and already exhibits personality. The hair coming off of his forehead could benefit from some variety in the strokes, right now there all the same size and thickness. I'd suggest even for anime inspired hair to add some short strokes starting in the middle and make them a bit longer towards the sideburns and then short again. This should make for a much more pleasing look and feel. Good luck!:thumb:

[dkvdeeto]

a little suggestion here.......... - i think the hair should go further back from the forehead -

[god_gilaz]

thanks to mr. Marcus for the tips. orking on it now. hehehe... yup there a lot can be explore in Z-brush, i don't have the fix model for the final, but i felt a bit satisfied on that 1 above, however i still tweaking and fixing the odds. anyway i try to keep te anime look. hahaha yeah there are something funny on the fore head as everybody said...

[god_gilaz]

:doh: :doh: :doh: finaly come to this, but get stuck on the bum map to 3d max plese help

[zabuza2k]

amazing i love u work ^^

[god_gilaz]

thanks man... continuing to texture on the main 3d program, still far far beyond finished... hhhhhhh.........hicks......

[god_gilaz]

hehe this is my trial render for the the difuuse still tweaking and sink on it:doh: :doh:

[god_gilaz]

hi this my newest render... tweak some parts. hope can rig soon

[Thunder Bunny]

Hey god_gilaz, good work so far. Just a couple of things that need to be tweeked and I think you'll be there or close too it. The first thing is his ears feel too high. Usually, the bottom of the ear lines up with the bottom of the nose and the top of the ear lines up with the top of the eye area. I think you also should pull his hair line back a small drop. Mostly because Shikamaru has a huge forehead. The other thing that needs some attention, is the hair on the back of his head. usually hair on the back of the head will flow straight down. Unless there hair is curly or wavey in which case it would wave or curl straight down.

At this point with your texture I think you've got everything colored. It's time to pull out some more details. First his clothes needs some kind of fabric feel to it. By that, I mean you should overlay using layer styles, filters, layer types of fabric over top of your model's clothes. Then I would try to dirty up areas, try thinking about where dirt would collect on this character and put some noise/gritty looking paint overly layed on the texture. Lastly the flesh tone. All flesh tones have red and orange in it. Even Black's have red in there cheeks or around there eyes. That and no flesh tone is even. So splatter that paint all over it. Add some slight blemishes or feckals.

All in all, you've got's a really good start man. Just keep it up and you'll get a really nice model out of this for sure.

[god_gilaz]

hi, thanks for the tips, hehe its great that there is somebody can give such a good advice, i have really no idea for detail, quite blank lately hehehe, but what you have said have some point, so.. going to fix it
tips from someones does give idea for my progress thanks man.. (^_^) honestly i myself dont like his hair and head too much especially when saw other ppl's progress.. hehehe going to tweak it.. hope can finish it before the dead line

[god_gilaz]

hi, this is my final pose...:D

[FredH]

Final pose looks really good! Keep on going! one day left!

[god_gilaz]

other view

[god_gilaz]

hehehe.. thanks man..
whta should i do with the beautishot, really have no idea??? help please...

[god_gilaz]

hi, this is my compositing, i guess still not as gud as anybody else.....:cry: :cry: :cry:

[Chasarsis]

Lol, I remember that scene; definitely shikamaru at his finest. Grats on getting it in!

[god_gilaz]

;) yup indeed... hhhh... thank to this challange, leran alot about lo poly modeling, not easy as tot... hahahaha

[3dsquid]

congrats on finishing ! last image looks cool :D