Naruto Challenge | ALW-DaSilva | Yondaime

[ALW-DaSilva]

Naruto Challenge | ALW-DaSilva | Yondaime
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ALW-DaSilva has entered the competition!

[TryForce]

Nooooeesss, a 3rd guy who is doing this one!


*joke*

=D wanna see you doing this!

[ALW-DaSilva]

akh..hahahaah you chose the same char...akhh....its..Yondaime...too
btw...cherrs...hehehhe...

ow yah i want upload some of my sketch costume design for yondaime hehhehhe...(i dont' wanna lose u TRY FORCE);p

everybody...have the spirit okey....

[ALW-DaSilva]

here my sketch...i think i draw this costume is look like the original one from the comic books or the film....actually i combine it with my imagination about ninja boots...have a shield at their knee...:D btw this is just sketch so...i will follow this reference as my model in 3D later....;)

[TryForce]

actually if you get his face textured well and make his feets abig longer you probably would have a win =P

i know it matches your design, though why did you choose giving him a sword? I actually only used his very odd Kunai's as a weapon with a seal on them.

[renderdevil]

dont you think that's a little sophisticated cloth for a ninja?

[ALW-DaSilva]

hahahh you ar right try force..ok i'll gona fix it..hehehhe:D
i think his so chibi too hehehhee...i'll gonna fix it at my 3D later,this is just my ref for base of my model.thanks try force...btw the samurai/sword...is just optional for me hahha..just my inspiration about ninja :think:

[ALW-DaSilva]

wow hey....you join this challange too...cherrs btw...

[TryForce]

dont you think that's a little sophisticated cloth for a ninja?

i kinda had my thoughts on the same question to him, though looking at the Ninja game Shinobido, i think its passable somehow.


;) yeh i joined too. thanks =)

[ALW-DaSilva]

hmmm...i give some sketch from front view....the samurai/sword is optional, i think great if i can make it in 3d...and have enough poly..huehueueue:D

[vresu]

wow nice one kepp the good work men :thumb:

[GoDai]

nice concept, but i think it more look like samurai than ninja....
pardon me if i wrong....

[xvampire]

looks cool, keep it up :)

the sword doesn't really fit tho ...

if you want to put it there, he must have a strap.

or try to put the sword on his hip.

be careful of his baggy pants is little bit too huge,
it will crash each other when you make it in 3d.
but i think u ll anticipate that :)

just for the info (CMIIW)
is his coat will have different color inside?
if so, the polygons count are consider doubled for that object

cya

[TryForce]

he is to busy with clothes i think, he actually was pretty simpel when he got shown.

But you decide on that.

anyway, feel free to use this headref for modeling:
http://i84.photobucket.com/albums/k35/TryForceX/Headref.jpg

[hennypurwadi]

Wow... good concept.
But, I think the model have too many atributs,
maybe difficult to make it less than 5.000 poly.

[ALW-DaSilva]

vresu-thanks man..hehehe
GoDai-hahaha...i still doubt about the sword too..but..i saw
references..yondaime hold on the sword..so in final pose i will make a
pose that yondaime is hold on the sword hehehhe.not hang on his
back...ooouu yeahhh
xvampire-hahha thanks speed..the baggy pants doesnt look like this i wll make it
doesnt crash each other..hehehe...u can trust me...
tryforce-thanks for the ref..i like it..this is free yoo..nothing have to pay..??
(kekekek just kidding dude)
hennypurwadi-thanks sister huehuehueh
i have finished the whole body without hair it's still have 2634
polygons and iwill make it fit 5000...hehehe thanks once again..

[ALW-DaSilva]

hey everybody,...i have new update...sclupt with z-brush....:)
C&C ar welcome...
:D

[ALW-DaSilva]

ow yeah i'm forgot to upload back view...sorry C&C please hehehhehe:D

[hikari151]

very nice sculpt~

i like the coat thingy~.. =D

[3dsquid]

whoa, nice progress ! i like his ninja shoes :D

[ALW-DaSilva]

@hikari151: thanks....hikari..i'm still learning yer know..this is just my test
sclupt..;)

@3dsquid: wew..yoo masta...thanks...bro..hehehe:D

[lone wolf]

Great work man ! Hope you can follow the details from your concept cause that's the real eyecatching stuff (besides the looks, of course).
Good Luck man.

[bin]

nice progress!! better work at his face too!!
halah apaan sih inggris gw ndeso abis =P

hajar mukanay dulu bleh.. jgn lupa peraturan 5000 trisnya itu

[SupRore]

Fast progress. I think everything is looking solid for a start, but needs refinement. Cloth is vague and zbrush blobby, and the anatomy doesn't really look right yet. Keep it up. :)

[tef]

Awesome work man.. Your start looks very fast and agile as he is supposed to do. I am awaiting his high poly head :)

[Yung]

Take care of those tearing look on the cloak too. The low poly could suck up valuable tricounts for the cloak to work. Still good work so far. Keep it up.

[ALW-DaSilva]

@bin: loh yah ga deso toh bin hehehe...thanks....yoo brother..

@SupRore: wait for the next progress...thanks to u too..not fast...just littlr bit
test for the sclupt...

@tef: the hi poly head just now has been convert to max as normal map
heheh....thanks and cheers....

@Yung: yup...i know...thanks btw...

[ALW-DaSilva]

yoo...update...update....hehehheh....
this is from front view...
there ar lot more object un texture yet...so..need ur C&C guys....:D

[3dsquid]

awsome man! need some bigger images to see all your details :D
keep it up!

[xvampire]

looks pretty cool :)

I like ur concept :) is that all low poly?

[TryForce]

better then expected, more angles could be better for crits though.

[bin]

nice yoooooo.. =P

[ALW-DaSilva]

@3dsquid: oh thanks squid..ehhe i will update the close image so u can see the
details hehehe....nice....

@xvampire: thanks yoo....masters....

yup there all low poly..because i have applied normal map to all of
the objects..thanks...:D

@Tryforce: yup..i think so...owke i will update the defferent angel..:thumb:

@bin: tahnks...nice tooo....(why u follow my words hahahhaha...kiddink):lol:

[ALW-DaSilva]

so here i give some wire view...and details from my objects...hehehhe:)

[ylaya]

nice progress, but what concern me is that the hand, i think it's to small...

[tef]

Some objects, ie. the rope are looking a bit flat, I would increase the diffuse shadow on it. Same goes with the handle on the throwing knife.

[ALW-DaSilva]

@necromanthil: thanks yooo. i will tweek it....

@tef: how..how...u mean the rope around the neck...?? yes.. its a little bit flat i think hahahha...owke2...tweak more...thanks btw dude..

[ALW-DaSilva]

owke now...times to update and upload hehee....:lol:
render view in different angle......and different pose.:thumb:

[ALW-DaSilva]

hmmm.....retouch photoshop....test C&C guys please.......:D

[Mike_inel]

I'm digging the flames on his coat, really stylish!
The ground looks pretty mirrored/symmetrical, but other than that it looks great!

[Amethyst]

Your art is colourful and interesting. I love it very much. You know you have until October 22, 11.59 eastern time to submit your art? Looking forward to see the final....

[TryForce]

be careful with fractal brushes, you over did it. also as i remember that the final Submition should be very limited on Photoshop touches. Means no effects or some on the pictures, only if you want your name or some.

Eventhough i think the whole thing got abit to busy, as the head isn't remindin me of the 4th. but it's up to you ;)

Happily you will probably submit it :) gj!

[ylaya]

wohooo, nice update!!cool!

[3dsquid]

wow. somebody's been busy this week :D
great work man, you finished it already :D

[ALW-DaSilva]

@Mike_inel: thanks mike...at first i just confuse about the flame colour...just black and white or colourfull..but i decided to put the colour one...hehehe so have a bit eye catching....yeah i know thats symetrical....btw this retouching photoshop just my test in my free time.....

[ALW-DaSilva]

@Amethyst : thanks dude...i know...i even not make the pedestal yet..hehehe
owke u will see the final......

@TryForce: yeah i know thats not allowed photoshop retouch a lot...thats just
my test hehehehe....thanks btw tryforce....

@3dsquid: hahahaha... yeah i think....thanks

[ALW-DaSilva]

this my yon with the pedestal....maybe the final submit i'll try different pose...:doh:

[Ged]

good work, quite realistic.

onto crits: the knees have a blurry texture above them? and the colour scheme is a bit chaotic, usually characters have 2 or 3 main colours on their outfits to make them really unique and memorable. the rope hanging over the chest in 3 threads looks very flat, perhaps make it thinner so its less noticable?

just some suggestions, do what you will.

[Yung]

Hmm his face looks kinda stiff but still I like your overall finish! Everybody seems to have a platform/stand thingy....hmm

[BuroKun]

Nice job! but I agree with Yung, his face dose look weird, and the hand with the kunai dose not seem to have a good grip on them.

[Marcus Dublin]

This was an interesting take on Yondaime and a difficult design even for the most seasoned artist. You’ve come a long way ALW-DaSilva and it’s great that you got a chance to finish this model. I hope to see more of your work in future comps, especially now that you have some more experience under your belt, nice going.:)

[tef]

Awesome work ALW-DaSilva. I really love the amount of details put into this one. Perhaps tune down the sun rays a bit to reveal more of your wonderful character :-)

[ALW-DaSilva]

@Ged: thanks ged....hohohohoh...i see....owke i will tweek it a little bit...

@Yung: hahaha...well thanks yung....nice...!! yeah i use that standing
thing(pedestal) huehuehe....

@BuroKun: hmmm....i will tweek the face....maybe the texture a little
bit..hehe thanks

[ALW-DaSilva]

@Marcus Dublin: wew.. thanks yoo for the praise..hehehe, i'm really appreciate
it....well yah..hope i can see u too dude in another
comps...hehehhe...thanks once again....

@tef: Thanks to u too tef....yeah maybe make the sun ray a little bit soft..will
be great.....

[ALW-DaSilva]

wew week by week has past....every body make this competition sharp i like it...
:thumb: and great2 artist do the own art very2 awsome....;) thanks too every one for help me for this comps..thanks to the opinion. critic and of course ur arts too because its inspire me..hehehhe..nice to join this comps....:thumb:

this is my submit:

[Yung]

Congrats on finishing, and I like it too! The pose with the rasengan especially looks good though a bit stiff. Now I know why the face looks a bit stiff haha. Once again job well done :D

[3dsquid]

so you finally submit it :D good luck bro !

[Mike_inel]

Wow! Your details came out really nice!
Nice entry!