Naruto Challenge | Yasuo | Deidara

[Yasuo]

Naruto Challenge | Yasuo | Deidara
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Yasuo has entered the competition!

[Yasuo]

Uh, well, greetings!

I feel a bit out of place, seeing all those awesome sketches by all those talented artists who hang around here.. But then again, their critics must be the best you can get, eh?

Well, this is a first sketch I did.. It's a simple costume idea I had in mind, please, criticize and comment away~

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m234/rikkitsuko/deidisketch01-1.png

(No, I didn't draw it with purple pencils, I changed the color in PS. And that's the first picture I actually 'signed', yay!)

[Eclipse]

That really rocks man, I like how you redid the coat they wear but still kept the design on the character. The only thing I'm not really digging id the armor piece on his chest, it looks kinda outta place and unnecessary. Also his fingers look a bit weird, but I'm sure that will be worked out in the final. I'm really looking forward to the next update, cool stuff!

[Yasuo]

Thanks Eclipse~

This is a second sketch I finished a few minutes ago. I personally like it waaay more than the first one.. It looks a lot less stiff *cough* (I tried uber-hard not to over-stylize when I did the first sketch, and it turned out looking like..that)

Well, I got rid of the fishnet-shirt and the armor piece (which was there to protect his fourth mouth) as Eclipse "suggested" indirectly. I like it better this way! I also left out one of his bags, but somehow he seems to have.. too little going on now, is anyone else of that opinion?

http://i105.photobucket.com/albums/m234/rikkitsuko/deidisketch02.png

Yea, my hands always look weird

[Foofoo]

hi. cool costume. but you gotta check your anatomy, especially his fingers on the left, which looks all broken up because you have them twisted inwards at an impossible angle. you might consider using photo reference. also his pose looks unbalanced...his head is leaning too much backwards. Again...photo reference could help. wouldn be too difficult to pose yourself infront of a mirror :) Sorry if i'm too harsh.