Naruto Challenge | neophensiline | Hyuga Neji Real

[neophensiline]

Naruto Challenge | neophensiline | Hyuga Neji Real
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neophensiline has entered the competition!

[ALW-DaSilva]

wew..HYUGA NEJI...BYAKUGAN dude..hehhe ..
i like neji because he has defferent personality from the others..i think..
cheers dude...

[neophensiline]

This is my concept for adult Neji:) . The idea is to make neji looks like his uncle, Hyuga Hiashi (Hinata's Father). I was thinking to cut his hair. well, i still need suggestion about this. any opinion about the hair?

[3dsquid]

omigosh, nice concept! is it photo ? :D

[neophensiline]

Yes, it's only photo retouching. just for concept. :lol:

[BiG ToE]

keep his hair long. If you cut it, you may lose the Neji feel.

Or you could do a bit of both. Cutting parts of the hair and leaving other parts long. Wish I had some ref images to better explain myself.

[Z3pHyrian]

Hey, nice looking Neji you have going there. I can see what BiG ToE is talking about. Cutting his hair may make him lose the Neji look. I guess you could cut the front hairs a bit shorter, but I think you should keep the hair in the back long. I can't wait to see your model!

[neophensiline]

thanks guys, i think i'll keep him in long back hair. :) dudidam said to me personally, that neji will looks like F4 (meteor garden, Taiwan TV serial) if i cut his hair :lol:. i think it's true. well thanks again guys. i think i'll get his long back hair tied, just like younger neji.

[FredH]

yeah, I agree with everyone... keep the long hair. If you can make your model look like this concept, he is going to look really good. I just wish you would find some more interesting boots. Currently, the boots seam like an after thought.

Can't wait to see more!:)

[dkvdeeto]

Awesome pic!!
this means he's now the head of the hyuuga clan??
i think lot's of people rather choose neji than hinata heh....
by the way, is he wearing a boot??...

[neophensiline]

the boots:lol:??? yes i need to change the boot. how can i forgot that :uhh:. its should be wooden clog. i'll fix it on the next post. the concept is still on WIP, feel free to comment:)

[neophensiline]

here is update01, i change the boot:lol:

[Marcus Dublin]

I agree with Fred in saying that if your model holds up to the concept then you have a top tier entry on your hands! Nice job neophensiline I can't wait to see more.:)

[hennypurwadi]

Can he fight with that wooden clog?
How about change it with this?

[ThatDon]

I don't think he is going for a ready for action look, but more of a refined and grown up Neji, which is freaking cool!

[Yung]

Yeah like the uncle of Hyuga Neji, I believe there's where the idea comes from? Still this is looking very cool. Good luck with it man.

[winsonk]

very cool concept art man
like it alot!!
keep it up man

[neophensiline]

hennypurwadi: i think ThatDon already answer your question. Thanks ThatDon. :), even the clog doesn't made for battle, its still possibly with his byakugan, the same condition happened when Hyuga Hiashi (Hinata's Father) try to protect the audience at Chuunin final exam stadium (When The Leaf get Attacked), and its so cool.:cool:


Marcus Dublin, ThatDon, Yung, winsonk: Thanks for your support man, i still need to learn a lot, i still need advises from you all. :doh:

I think, i've done for the concept..
here is my Zbrush progress.
still try to get the face to iDNAR Concept. it's hard man:doh: C&C please

[Yung]

Looks like it's a good start! First of all the eyes and nose seems to be off from that angle. The eyes in the concept is bigger and nearer it seems. The nostrils is a bit off and needs to be a bit more thinner. The nose bridge too can be more sharper and higher. From yer model's angle the lower lips's curvature can be further tweak and the chin line is a bit too puffy. Perhaps you can straighten that cheek line for a more angular look?

Still, it's pretty solid I say. But what do I know, I am a rigger? :P Good luck fellow.

[donatello]

Well if there's one thing Yung haven't mentioned yet, maybe its the eye brows expression. What do you think?
rock on, bub :cool:

[dkvdeeto]

love to see the progress man!!

[hennypurwadi]

I don't know Hyuga Neji's story.
But he is really, really handsome in your 3D model....

[neophensiline]

Thanks for your inputs guys:), here is an update for the head. i think i need to move to the body now, too many times spent for the head huh:doh:. c&c's please.

[ylaya]

hi neophensiline, i think the base of his nose is a little bit pull out, maybe you can push it inward a bit ...just my 2 cent.......

[neophensiline]

Thanks Necromanthil, well yes, the 3d doesn't fit perfectly to the 2d concept. my goal for the 3D is only to get at least 70-90% match to concept. and for your input, thanks again, but i think i can apply it to the 3d, because it will effect the side view :doh:, it's hard to match it to the concept while you still need to get the right shape at all point of view.

:) keep give me c&c's on the next WIP post.

[xvampire]

very model-like concept :D it must has lots of fan-gurl

btw ... b careful with the perspective range between the concept and the real 3d. somehow the 3d version look like has more perspective ...

btw the head concept is inspire me to get bisho look in 3d :)

and damn u should join icg also... u got talent man :)

[neophensiline]

:lol: thanks xvampire, well i don't think that i got talent, i've join icg actually. and i usually posting with other nickname.
i still need a lot of practice. well here is my update, still making the base model for zbrushing. with time extension i think i can finished this one.

[xvampire]

u might want to beef up the cheek ...

the outfit itself, already represent hyuga's family,
traditional and classic :)

[neophensiline]

Thanks XVampire, yes the cheek still need tweaking, i'll tweak it on low poly model later. BTW here is my progress, just done the Zbrush stuff. I'm not too happy with the result, but i think its enough at this time. I hope the texture will cover the minus things. hup hup. the retopology is the next. :yawn:

[3dsquid]

whoa, very cool sculpting! are u gonna morph his face? coz his mouth seems a little open :)

[Japhir]

wow! awesome! i love it!

[neophensiline]

3dsquid---thanks man, yours is welldone too. yes i'll give some facial expresion.

Japhir-- thanks for your support. i hope the low poly won't make a downgrade:lol:

[3dimentia]

His upper body seems to thin to me compared to his legs. Considering how muscular the rest of him looks, maybe buff him up there a tad?

[Yung]

Looking very nice! His belt/sash in the middle, the detailing there seems muddied. Quick finish this piece !

[xvampire]

in my oppinion,

keep his coat, permanently, its lookin good ,...
just delete the polys underneath (that not seen), so you can have more space for his texture ...
and you can playin with his texture, instead of keeping whole the hakama on the right ...

about the cheek and other proportion issue, you can also cheat it after projecting in low poly ...
and tweak the low freq proportion in low poly instead of spending a time fixing it in zbrush :)

[Marcus Dublin]

I so hope you get to finish this piece in time for the deadline; it’s a stellar rendition of Neji. Nice going neophensiline.:thumb: :thumb:

[neophensiline]

:cry: i'm really sad now, I can't finished my Neji On Time. but i still want to finished it.

here is my update on texture. still in progress.

3dimentia--thanks for your input, i'll tweak it on low poly later.
XVampire--Yes i'll keep the coat, never think to delete it, thanks for your inputs
Yung--Thanks, i'll fix it on texture later.
Marcus Dublin--Thanks, but i'm sorry i can't finished it on time.

:brick: :brick: :cry: :cry: :( next time maybe.
i think next week my Neji will Finished.. :o

[ylaya]

hoho, gudluck then! finish it!then we can mix them in one piece shot!hehehe...

[hennypurwadi]

Never mind it can't finish on time....
Just finish this handsome Hyuga, someday.

[neophensiline]

Here is another update... the time is running out now. i think this is my last update for this competition :lol: I learn a lot in this competition, thanks for all.. and good luck for all entry.

[Yung]

Man this would have been a strong and great piece. Still it is great as it is right now. Hopefully you will finish this and show us one day :D

[Amethyst]

I hope you will show us the finished image soon. Your entry has such elegance...

[lone wolf]

Nice Work Dude !
Better put some accessories and I'm sure he'll be more eyecatchin !
Anyway, the shoes maybe too big a little ... imho ^_^
Bravo !