Naruto Challenge | siilv | sasori

[siilv]

Naruto Challenge | siilv | sasori
http://www.gameartisans.org/contests/competitions/uploaded_thubnails/35-game-3d-art-1658-1190524236-thumb.gif

siilv has entered the competition!

[siilv]

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/1 copy copy.gif

hi~ here's my basic concept sketch~:)

[Eclipse]

looks pretty awesome man, I like how you used his other puppets head and tail in the design. looking forward to the model :D.

[siilv]

thank you for interesting in my pic :lucky:

i think that is a sword~.....

like............weapon about IVY in SoulCalibur. @_@;

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/left.gif

[TryForce]

keep original to the first pic, and nah, no sword >_< , keep it a rail gun.

Just remove the black on his neck and you got a winner!

[siilv]

Wow~! rail gun! that's cool idea! :cool:
like this? ^-^)>;

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/rail.gif

and remove black......

I can't agree with you more :thumb:

[siilv]

and in progress modeling........hhh:)

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/wire1.gif

he has a complicate hair....:cry:

[zabuza2k]

^^ hehe nice

[siilv]

h h h thank you~>_<)b

[siilv]

work in prgress...
base modeling in MAX:)

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/modeling.jpg

[3dsquid]

wow, nice progress! how many tris is this? also are u gonna bring this awesome model into zbrush? :)

[CheN]

Wow

It is considerably and.

Completion work was expected all

[siilv]

3dsquid
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hi~
thanks for your praise~:)
now this poly count is 3458, tri count is 5745
it is base model...it will be added some object more and reduce tri^^)>;
it has been into zbrush:)

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/z_p_head.gif



CheN
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thanks my friend >_<)b

[siilv]

high poly in zbrush :)

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/zb_mod2.gif

[ThatDon]

Really nice job on the feet man. lovin it

[zann]

Cool sculpting u hav got here :thumb:

[siilv]

ThatDon
//
thank you very much:lucky:
i'm so worried about complicate hair :doh:

zann
//
he he You overpraise!
your model is very cool~
thank you:)

[xvampire]

i like the UMba- Umba head!!

the thing that look ovious rite now is his pants ..
the bottom part it defined
while the upper part is less detailed ...

[siilv]

thank you for your advice:)
i think you were right. so less detail...h h h
and your model is very nice~:thumb:

[TryForce]

hehe this looks great so far, :D finish it!

[Yung]

Nice model there, though I think the face could use a bit more love :D. Still this is a WIP, so emm yeah yer looking good. GOod luck fellow, and finish this piece :D

[siilv]

TriForce
// thank you~ work in progress - mapping... he he:)

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/face copy.gif

Yung
// thanks~ :) How about his face? i think he has love face... ^-^;

[Kerepres]

Wow! He's looking good.
Will be waiting to see more

[HntrLuc]

Looking good man, cool style on the textures!

[neophensiline]

i think his eyes should be lazy eyes with bigger eyelid, its more sasori. right now he looks like innocent boy. and the hair color, i think it should be red. can't wait to see the final version.:)

[Sorenson]

This is looking very promising. There are some really great korean artists on this site. Clueme, taehoon, and now you. I can't wait to see what this one will look like when finished. I am positive it will be very cool:)

[siilv]

Kerepres
// thanks man :):thumb:

HntrLuc
// thank you. thank you.^-^):thumb:

neophensiline
//
thank you for your advice^^
you are right. he has red hair and lazy eyes.:)
and....He need more charisma.^^)>;
thanks~:)

Sorenson
//
Kuk;;
I'm so flattered..^^;
thank you very much~:lucky:


and progress more...^-^

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/face2_1.jpg

[zann]

Ooooh red hair sasori.....very nice style u hav :)

[TryForce]

hehe , i cant disagree!

Awesome :D

[tef]

Very cool hair indeed, not so tidy as the usual.

I would however do something about his nose, it looks very thin, allmost squeezed. Same goes with his upper lip. It is not much though and lips and noses have very small margins until they become thin, thick, putty or wide.

[FredH]

I agree about the nose. Some width would help. Otherwise, he is looking great! Keep up the good work!:)

[Yung]

Hmm, I think I can see a little bit of his hair through his mouth.......single sided poly problem perhaps? Nice work so far fellow!

[siilv]

zann
//
Thank you~ :)

Tryforce
//
hehe thanks thanks :)

tef
//
Thx for ur advice.
I have updated my work include your opinion.
I think my model is better than last time.
thank you:)

FredH
//
thank you for your advice and praise. thank you:)

Yung
//
That hasn't any poly problem.
just when i was mapping, I covered blue color inside the mouth.
thanks^^

and rendering test...h h h

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/f4 copy.jpg


Now, I'm so urgent for deadline...ㅜ_ㅜ

where are you living?
I confuse when this competition will be ended.
can you tell me how many time do we have?

somebody help me~ㅜ_ㅜ)~

[TryForce]

just finish till saturday and submit^^ easy?

your update looks great! though abit noise into the normal map could be great i think.

awesome though!

[MoP]

Siilv: The contest will end 22nd October, 11:59pm Eastern Time (Eastern USA I guess). Full details at the bottom of the page here:
http://www.gameartisans.org/contests/competitions/3/readbrief/index.htm

This entry is looking cool, keep going! :)

[tef]

Very cool and the nose looks great now. The gloss make his body look like it is made of ceramic, or car paint, perhaps add some softness to it to make it more like plastic. Though the hard spec could be an interesting approach I don't think it looks very durable and flexible for combat.

Everything else looks great to me.

[siilv]

TryForce
//
thank you.
I owe you a lot. now I can concentrate my work.:)


Mop
//
thank you for your detail information.
thanks:)

tef
//
thank you thank you.
VRayMtl was very sensitive...ㅜ_ㅜ
Now I making this picture using by specular map and controlling VRayMtl Reflect amount.
thanks:)


i need more testing.... he he


and... comic shot^-^)>;;
http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/33.jpg

thank you everyone:)

[FredH]

That is just really cool. Nothing else to say. I am excited to see this one finished!

[tef]

Now when I think about it his lips are very pouty as if he is going to whistle. Not a big thing to fix and that could just be my impression.

[siilv]

FredH
//
thank you
I almost finish.:)

tef
//
thank you for your advice.
you are right.^^ he he :)


m....i have a question^^)>;

should I register my pic that is last version to this forum?
Even if I have already registered my work to submit page. :inocent:

[3dsquid]

woow, very cool one siilv! i really love his hair..
best luck on your entry! :)

[siilv]

thanks man :)

and....
this pic is my last update^-^)

.....

I think that is FINISHED!

I submited it he he :)

thanks to all those people who cheer and advice in this thread.
that is really encouraged to me^^

Eclipse, TryForce, zabuza2k, 3dsquid, CheN, ThatDon, zann, xvampire,
Yung, kerepres, HntrLuc, neophensiline, Sorenson, tef, FredH and MoP ^^ thanks :)

This is my first Comps in GameArtisans,
When I joined Comps at first time, I was worried about being awkward.
But, kind replies made me to overcome awkward :)

I can have various experiences for me during this Comps .

I'm hopefully we will see each other again in future contests.

thank you all ^-^)b

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/winner_forum.jpg

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/beauty shot_forum.jpg

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/wire_forum.jpg

http://dmaahfhs.mireene.com/texture_forum.jpg

[TryForce]

to be honest, this could be even in the top 5 i think... this is awesome, great pose and render!!! ;D

Very good job.

[Thunder Bunny]

I never thought that the dolls would have a shine to their bodies. But, you pulled it off. And it looks spectacular! Great work!

[FredH]

I have no complaints, I like everything, especially the face:) I am glad you enjoyed your time here. It has been great seeing you build up this character from start to finish. I think you were a positive experience to many artists on this board.

Great stuff! See you in a future comp:thumb: