Naruto Challenge | Mogster | Temari

[Mogster]

Naruto Challenge | Mogster | Temari
http://www.gameartisans.org/contests/competitions/uploaded_thubnails/35-game-concept-art-272-1190759883-thumb.gif

Mogster has entered the competition!

[Mogster]

yay and im in bit late but hey already started some initial sketches, still not too shure what im going to do... thinking of a nice flygirl makeover hhmmhmm...

[Mogster]

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/4080/temarithumbstn7.jpg
http://img102.imageshack.us/img102/8518/temarifaceji3.jpg
still all in the air atm. Using her later year clothes not her initial ones as a ref.

[TryForce]

1st one!!! looks like her and its like her!

keep it up!

[Mogster]

yea first one is just basic temari. *shrug*. sketch i wa sjust trying to draw her face at 1 am -_-

[zabuza2k]

yeah i like the #1 sketch to

[Enma]

For a re-design, I prefer the third, only with the bow round her waist. Cool thumbnails.

[cookepuss]

Actually, I like the 3rd one too. From a style POV, that's my fave. There's something very attractive and suggestive about that one leg reveal. Compounded with the silky/flowing design, it screams elegant, yet playful. I can see why the current favorite is #1. It's a simple and clear design to realize. Its something that could easily exist as an actual garment and not look awkward.

From a practical standpoint (ie animation and construction), my choice is a modified #5. #4's a little busy looking, but #5 could be tweaked and streamlined without making it too generic. If I went with #5 I'd probably swap out the belt for the one in #1 and remove that #5 red train/bow thingy. It's a nicer contrast of design elements and color placement, imo. It also makes for a very simple, yet clear silhouette. #1 is maybe too classic looking. Don't know if that's good or bad.

Either way, you can't go wrong with #1 or a modded #5.

[FredH]

I rarely use the word adorable, but the 3rd one looks adorable and has the potential to be a very beautiful costume for a female character. Otherwise, they all look really good. Nice work on your sketches. You really thought them through.

[Mogster]

thanks guys, yea I'm quite partial to #3 as it is elegant looking as I'm going for a an older look. 4-5 are a bit too militaristic but cool non the less -_-!, though I'm not too sure how I'd incorporate the bow with the dress.

cookepuss - Yea 4-5 are very busy, I enjoy doing amours i guess habit.

- FredH - - :D 3 It is, now to get to work on views.

[Ste]

yeah number 3 is brilliant!

[Mogster]

Well not the greatest pose or anything dont have time for it :/ just got a new job and time has gone down the tube... anyways..

my beauty shot down, just have to add 2 more to my roughs and then just the views which ill do on Thursday's my day off o.O!

Basically as i see it Temari at about 25 +- and a Genin so she doesnt wear a bandanna anymore i wanted to give her a bit more of a regel sexy look i guess -_-! Her fan will be done with the turnaround images as well as shoulder pad othographic


http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4707/temaribeautyflats02am8.jpg

Edit: edited a bit..

[Defeat]

Looking very nice, One thing I would do is make her neck a bit smaller. Atm it seams kinda big. Good luck.

[Antimagic]

I really like the robes she is wearing. I am glad you chose 3. However, it looks like she is walking on her robes at the bottom. Also, I think her eyes need a little more work. Right now, it just looks like a shape of an eye with a big black dot. Might be nice if you gave her green eyes and some highlights. Also, I am not sure about this, but maybe airbrush over her neck and face to soften all the hard color lines.

Besides all this, she is looking really good so far. Looking forward to seeing her after your vacation day on thursday:)

[Mogster]

Ah well looks like i didnt make it -_- was too tired to work on my turn arounds *shrug* next time ;p

[Darksun]

Hmm.. dunno man.
My clock says 0.21.20.58 remaining?
maybe we have a chance?

[FredH]

Yeah, still one day left. You already have the sketches and main pose, so all that is left is the modeling sheet. Perhaps you can still make it?:D

If not, no worries man. There will be other comps to enter:)

[Mogster]

yea new job is kicking my butt long hours -_-, and i just got my hellgate london beta... gonna finish it but not in time. Least i got another portfolio piece :D

[Darksun]

true true.. :D
I think I'm in the same boat. No way I'll have orthos..