Sweet Tooth

[Armanguy]

hey need some crits on the texture ONLY! theres no spec or normal.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v92/armanguy/wipsweet-2.jpg

[Johny]

the lightning information on the textures look really weird, there isnt any detailing, noyl flat textures like if you were going to use a normal map , mind posting the flats ? The minigun barrels look too shiney in front , the tires look a bit weird, since the metal is almost black and the tires look like rock.

I like the glass , except that the damage looks too white, like if the glass is actually made of ice and not glass .

Also , the metal on the truck shows signs of wheathering , but since it is apinted why there are no scratches or whatsoever ? theres just some lightning information done with dodge and burn i guess

http://images.jupiterimages.com/common/detail/03/69/22146903.jpg

http://asetint.bizland.com/Childwsafety.jpg

keep going and good job !

[YdoUwant2know]

Looks pretty good. I think Johny had some great points, I just have a few things to add.

It looks like you have a few seam issues with the hood. the hood appears to be darker than the surrounding areas. this is really noticeable right by the head light. also the pink dot by the word "ice" up top kind of just ends at the corner. while this one does not bug me as much, it might be worth a look.

it is also kind of hard to tell what is dirt and what is rust. beat up trucks should have rust on the bumpers, wheel wells and such, but i cannot tell if you have rust or just dirt.

aside from those few minor things, i think you have a great start, with a few tweaks could be very very cool. keep up the good work.

[cookepuss]

Just to add to that, I also think that you can fade out the pink spots a bit. Wear and tear is going to eventually desaturate and chip away at the colors. Doing that in your texture will give you that extra level of realism.

[Armanguy]

i thikn your right the tire looks a bit to flat! i think the spec makes it come out a bit more ill post it later :) im not on my computer.

[Armanguy]

http://smg.photobucket.com/albums/v92/armanguy/wipsweet-4.jpg

things that i know of lighting issue with the hood, i need to put bullet holes in the car it self.

[YdoUwant2know]

I'm not really sure what you are trying to show us with this new picture. The only difference i see is the addition of a bump map that also could use some tweaking.

It looks like you were trying to add rivets, am i right? while there placement is more or less correct, they are way too big for that kind of truck. they also appear to be sinking inward, not projecting out.

Other wise, i don't really see any changes...

[cookepuss]

I kinda agree, although I did see the lighting change. I'm pretty sure that you did spend some time on it, but the changes seem so subtle that you really need to flip back & forth between the 2 pics to even see any differences. Much to subtle to be of much significance, imo.

Still, it wasn't an entirely unpleasant model to look at in the first place. There's that going for it. :)