Naruto Challenge | awra | Tenten

[awra]

Naruto Challenge | awra | Tenten
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awra has entered the competition!

[awra]

hello ...:)
just finish these sketches,

oh my... better pick one soon, the deadline is near :think:

[Ged]

they are all very good, I really like the way youve handled her proportions and her face. I really like the upper body on the second one but the lower looks a bit like a thick trenchcoat

[alexisys]

Hi Awra! Great sketches you have here :)
You definitely have to go with first one , she looks superb :thumb:

[dkvdeeto]

HAH.....it's about time!!
finally picked tenten eh??
anyway, my choice is between 2 and 6.....

catch up and good luck, i wanna see those colors....

[scorn-maniac]

This is sweet stuff! I like no 1. Remind me of Kurara Chibana, Ms Japan who had an awesome national costume for Ms Universe 2006. No 5 is intersting too. The way you cross the 2 scrolls on her back.

Looking forward for more. :)

[Antimagic]

I like 2, 4, 5 and 6 (I know, I am not much help, but I couldn't pick a favorite one:flag: ) The added facial expressions are a real nice touch. Can't wait to see what you have planned for a final.

[awra]

Hi all... ^_^

to Ged : Thanks for the comments, I agree with you, I think that thick trench coat is too heavy or Tenten, so I guess I got to go with lighter costume :)

To Alexisys: I'm sorry if I didn't pick the no 1, because I just thought that heavy armor is too heavy for Tenten characteristic, I think I've been overdo those armor :D, I hope that's okay with you :)

to dkvdeeto: thanks for the comments, I see you choose costomes with more chinesse influence, like the original Tenten.

to scorn-maniac: hehehe, at first the idea to crossing the scroll is looks good at front view, but when I try to draw it from side view it didn't looks that good. I'm sorrry...

to Antimagic: Hey, thanks for the help :D, I think I'll go with no 6 but with some elements from no 5

all right, thank you guys, I'll submit the progress as soon as I can :)

[awra]

hi ... :)

I tried a pose for the final, I would like to collor it tommorow.

[dkvdeeto]

awesome pose >_<....

[FredH]

This is going to be really cool! The choice for a final pose looks great. However, her feet kind of look wrong. They both look like they are in a position for walking on the ground. Since she is jumping/flying, perhaps bending them all the way back would make her look even more like she is jumping high. Otherwise, everything else is shaping up nicely. Keep up the good work!

[awra]

dkvdeeto: Thankieess :D

FredH: thank you for the comments, let's see what I can do about her feet,
actually I want to keep it like the way it is :D, but I think I can give her some little fixes.

allrighty, I'm still coloring it now, I'll submit it after I'm happy with the collor :lucky:

[Sorenson]

I was hoping for an update by the time I decided to post in here hehe

Since there is no update, just wanted to chime in and say, this is looking great. I am really excited to see this one colored!

[Defeat]

No crits as of now, looks amazing.

[awra]

Sorenson: I'm sorry I didnt post any updates, because I was at family gathering :D
but I have an update now, and thanks for the visit :inocent:

Defeat: Thank you :)

oh no... I haven't done my modeling sheet :eek:

[FredH]

Woh, really nice man. The colors so far are looking really good! Hope you will make it in time. Still have that modeling sheet to do, and a nice presentation will be needed too:D

[awra]

hehehe thanks Fred :D

[scorn-maniac]

Sweet. It has the "Bam!" over it. Just a little bit more ya. :)

[EVIL]

If you find time, have a quick test if coloring the weapons is worth it, IMO it is I think it will make them pop out better.

Goodluck! looking really good

[brian_h]

This is looking great. 2 things jump out to me...one the weapons are getting lost. Even a highlight on one side would help them seem a bit more 3d. Also perhaps consider playing real quick with a circular gradient change in color from darker yellow to lighter behind the character...right now the value is all the same for the most part and something as simple as that would focus the attention back on the character and add a little sense of depth. 2 cents....looks great.

B

[Japhir]

looks great! love the colors!
one thing: the knives don't have any handles... http://images.buycostumes.com/mgen/merchandiser/27360.jpg
keep it up!