Naruto Challenge | WhiteGuardian | Sasuke Uchiha

[WhiteGuardian]

Naruto Challenge | WhiteGuardian | Sasuke Uchiha
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WhiteGuardian has entered the competition!

[WhiteGuardian]

Hello everyone. I'm coming with Sasuke Uchiha. I chose him coz he look like my favourite Jaganshi Hiee (Yu Yu Hakusho). Let's rock this contest :thumb:

Here is my first sketch. Another one will coming soon. :)
I change his cloths.

[WhiteGuardian]

Here my 2nd post of the sketch
C&c please :)

[cookepuss]

Gotta clean it up with Photoshop though. It's a tough "read" as raw pencil. Makes it harder to get a feel for the finer details.

Also, not that I could do any better, but some of the perspective is off in some shots. Good enough for a rough concept though.

Not half bad as a whole. Interested in seeing where you take it.

[WhiteGuardian]

Here my modelling sheet of Sasuke
Change a lot of his looks.

Thx cookepuss for the comments. :)

[WhiteGuardian]

Here i started :)
C&C please

[Sorenson]

Nice start. I am not sure why you put sakura so high with a sitting position. That makes your composition a little strange. I think you would need to make them all the same size in order to get this positioning to work..

Oh, wait, sasuke is in front:eek: I guess you just colored over sasuke because once you color him, you will then overlap sakura. Discard my previous comment then:) Just keep working on it. There is not much time left. You have a lot of work ahead of you:)

[WhiteGuardian]

Thx sorenson for the feedback. Yes, i put Sasuke in front of them. That true that i must fix for Sakura. 1 week to go. :)

[Sorenson]

ahh, good. Keep up the good work:)

[dkvdeeto]

i think it'll be better if u made naruto and sakura from the shipuden series....
cause in your composition, sasuke looks older than the other two...
good luck

[WhiteGuardian]

Sorenson
Thx :)

dkvdeeto
Aha, thx for the suggestion. :)

[WhiteGuardian]

Here my next progress. I'll change naruto and sakura later.

[TryForce]

uhm, ever heard of : Full metal Alchemist?
I dont know why, but this sasuke cloth reminds me on those soldier costumes XD

go go go!

[WhiteGuardian]

Ahahaha....i know what you meant. His cloth looks like Roy Mustang(Flame Alchemist) in FMA. I read that manga too. But, i don't take his cloth as my reference when i design Sasuke's cloth. Just wanna try to make he looks like a prince. Prince of Ninja i think. Haha..... :lol:
Btw, thx for the comment Tryforce

[Defeat]

Solid start man. Going by what you have done so far, some of the faces seem a bit smooshed and small. Naruto for instence. A way to fix it would be adding a gradient shadow on his face to show that hes looking at an angle. It's a great start, can't wait to see more.

[ALW-DaSilva]

wew......nice....great.....come on finish up ur sasuke....waiting for ur next progress...........

[WhiteGuardian]

Defeat
Thx for the comment

DaSilva
Wahaha. ICG clan coming here.

That my next progress

[hennypurwadi]

Hi, younger brother,
I think your Sasuke & Naruto are good, but your Sakura still need revise...

[FredH]

Yup, I agree with henny. I think it's her face that just needs a bit more tweaking. I believe it's her nose and mouth that could use some additional touch ups. Also, I thought sakura had green or blue eyes, but I am not really sure about this:think:

Almost there...Keep up the good work:)