Dominance War III | Cridder | Voivodess

[Cridder]

Dominance War III | Cridder | Voivodess


Cridder has entered the competition!

[Cridder]

EDIT: I'll post my latest work in the front so that people wont have to serf the pages.

Finally team Game Artisan can enter the war, thank you Fred.

Bellow are some quick drawings that I've done between work and sleep while waiting for this opportunity to post to arise. Comments and Critiques are more then welcome.

Drawing Concepts:

Disclaimer: The name Voivodess is a user name of a dear friend who is a model/artist. I have been given permission to use her username/figure images to create this entry. All rights belong to Voivodess's art if I should post any of her photos. To see some of Voivodess's work please visit here website: Voivodess.com

[necrostrife]

Im diggin the chains they give her that indian/persion look.
I can't make my mind up on what race/species to pick.

[Cridder]

Update:

Ok... little update. I've done a few drawing of some ideas that are passing through my head. Let me know what you guyz think, and as always C&C is welcome.

necrostrife >>> I was thing more Persian myself when I was making it. My goal was to see if I could make chains in to cloths, but I quickly grew tired of drawing the simple little links over and over again and thought it should be enough to express the idea.

[BigJohn]

I love the one in the first post labled 2 with the flying girl and the big-ass spawn-like cape. And I also love the one with the horn. Got something interesting going on there with the wind theme. Can do wind/lightning, which I don't think I've seen yet. Well, I've seen lightning, but not wind. Maybe the char can generate a tornado or a twister or something.

[Cridder]

Update:

Between those that have posted on the forum, friends, family and coworkers the characters concepts most liked are the fallowing five above. Either one of them had either 4 or 5 votes for. I will be cleaning up these concepts with hopes for a more final decision from the populous and myself so to start modeling soon.

[Brutus]

I like model 8 and 11's horn. Did I just wreck my own vote? Nice stuff.

[Satya]

Number eight is the coolest,
but number six represent void and darkness best, I think.

[Cridder]

Update:

Brustus & Satya >>> Thank you both for your feed back.

Ok.... Small update. I did a clean up drawing of number two. I figured I could get rid of 1 because it was pretty much like number two but with wings and a staff. Also making one less drawing to think off. A clean up of 8, 11 and 10 will be coming soon. Let me know what you guyz think.

[Cridder]

Update:

Ok all clean ups are finished I'm leaning to doing either 2 or 10, at the moment though I need to start modeling so might as well start with building a base female mesh. As always C&C is welcome

[dyezza]

i really like number 10 more just coz she has more attitude than the rest of them. the hair ROCKS! though i will never try it myself.. hehe
it would look really cool if she has a tattoo at the back of her head like what Genevieve has on Rush hour 3, the shins list or something (i dont remember what they call the list).

i love how you did the chain clothes very neat. The bells kind of bug me coz it just rings 'hey come and get me' every time i animate her in my head. she could get rape with that bell ringing. :\ no offense though, i seriously like your concepts.

number 8 forms a really great silhouette with that feather hair !! i'm just not a big fan of the bird on her chest, it makes the design less appealing/ busy.

number 11, the skull bra!! i actually modeled a scout character for my game prototype workshop group from school and she also wears skull bra. Skull bra just rocks. anyway, i really like the design on the siren. you could incorporate it with the shoulder armor you have on number 10 but without the blade, it just calls for danger.

hope my crits help I'm looking forward to your next update!

[Cridder]

Dyezza >>> Thanks for your C&C.

Originally Posted by dyezza

i really like number 10 more just coz she has more attitude than the rest of them. the hair ROCKS! though i will never try it myself.. hehe
it would look really cool if she has a tattoo at the back of her head like what Genevieve has on Rush hour 3, the shins list or something (i dont remember what they call the list).

A lot of my friends like the stripper pose too, but not all liked the hair. I like the idea of a tattoo, I'll think on it.

Originally Posted by dyezza

i love how you did the chain clothes very neat. The bells kind of bug me coz it just rings 'hey come and get me' every time i animate her in my head. she could get rape with that bell ringing. :\ no offense though, i seriously like your concepts.

The bells were a idea that I was just playing with, it fit the story of the character in my head but I see your point.

Originally Posted by dyezza

number 8 forms a really great silhouette with that feather hair !! i'm just not a big fan of the bird on her chest, it makes the design less appealing/ busy.

Hmm... I'll think of getting rid of the raven in the middle.

Originally Posted by dyezza

number 11, the skull bra!! i actually modeled a scout character for my game prototype workshop group from school and she also wears skull bra. Skull bra just rocks. anyway, i really like the design on the siren. you could incorporate it with the shoulder armor you have on number 10 but without the blade, it just calls for danger.

Its deffently an idea. I was actually thinking something similar, but for the pose you just wouldn't see it so I didn't bother.

[Cridder]

Update:

I'm really falling behind, well I should be able to catch up. Heres what I've got done today. Since my computer went insane and missing like 2 weeks of no progress I decided to go with the large cape one. I need to figure out a weapon and a quick story but those will come. More to come.