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Old 03-20-2009, 09:39 PM
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I am creating a Machine. His name is Egyptian and means "he who is true beside her".
For speed he travels as a quadruped and for assault a biped.



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Old 03-20-2009, 10:10 PM
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Ha.. thats some movement. design looks great and interesting.
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Old 03-20-2009, 11:24 PM
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this is really cool.
because it looks nice on four feet AND on two.
the most looks only good in one of this ways. ^^
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Old 03-20-2009, 11:31 PM
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Lol cool....make an animated GIF out of him jumping!
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Old 03-21-2009, 12:29 AM
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Awesome! What an interesting design. He attacks with energy blasts from his front paws?
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Old 03-21-2009, 10:22 PM
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Thanks for the comments guys!
JakeLV426 : The animated GIF doesn't really work the way I want it to. There are poses that are not in motion, which doesn't make sense. But here it is anyways. Maybe I will have some animation later since I plan on rigging it.


darthrith : Yes, energy blasts from the paws is the idea for biped mode.


I went back to pen and paper and did some thumbnails to stay loose. I am working on a perspective view at the moment.

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Old 03-21-2009, 10:39 PM
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Nice way of throwing together a concept. Look forward to seeing more.
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Old 03-21-2009, 10:45 PM
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great design, look forward to see from the front view
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Old 03-22-2009, 11:08 AM
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woot to animated gifs , really cool design! The side looks great, looking forward to see what it looks like from the gront!!
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Old 03-22-2009, 08:41 PM
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Thanks for the comments!

Here is the latest update. I want the armor to look more organic. I'll probably do more sketching before colors.
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Pure sweetness - I like the contrasts in the shape...also the hardsurface material going on...
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Awesome concept. I definitely like the first sketch with the rounder armor designs a lot. I'd say move in that direction for sure.
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Old 03-22-2009, 10:55 PM
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I love the design of the armor. Hmmm some how I feel it is missing something. Cool accessories and weapons maybe?
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Old 03-23-2009, 08:18 PM
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Thanks for the comments!

Xero: He is actually a big cat. Although, he does have bear like proportions . As for weapons He has his Palm Cannon and the 4 circles on top will be holding projectiles. Maybe he will have actual hands. I kinda like the idea of paws for now.

I just blocked out the shapes and created a quick rig to make sure everything will move correctly. I thought I could get away without an extra joint at the bottom of the 2 front legs but it looks like I will need to add an extra joint. So it will be like a real cat.



back to 2D for colors.
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Old 03-24-2009, 03:06 AM
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Still playing with the colors. But here is an update.
gonna start working more in 3D tomorrow
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This guy looks really awsome! I really like the proportions.

I only have one thing to suggest. Maybe its just me but the fangs don't seem to fit the rest of the beast. Have you tried any other sort of teeth? maybe something like the james bond villian Jaws.
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Mutty6: thanks, I think I will take the teeth out upon further examining them. A friend suggested he have just a face mask. I am undecided atm.

Here is the 1st pass at modeling. Got about half of him there with 4,640 tris.

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Hey lox409 your design is look great !!! wait to see your 3d model and i like glow position too.
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Very cool concept, I love the little animated gif you have going. Very cool. The first pass is looking good. I look forward to seeing more.
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Old 03-26-2009, 12:24 AM
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Thanks guys.

I got most of him there but I got to go back and correct some topology. Some things aren't moving correctly.
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