Naruto Character - Hinata

[FredH]

Hey guys, here is a character I am working on. Will finish her up during the holidays and post her finals in the showcase section. You might remember her from the naruto challenge

I have the base textures in, but it still needs a lot of work. Need to fix the modeling of her toes, put in straps on her hands, and fix the fold/crease that runs across her silk undergarmet.





Let me know if there is anything else that needs fixing:thumb:



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[ThatDon]

I already told you this but the hair silhouette needs fixing. and some kind of normal map information would be nice where the undershorts transition to her bare skin.

[Japhir]

looks nice! the toes seem pretty weird though, they are all of the same sise..
looking forward to seeing it finished!

[FredH]

Yeah, I agree man, the toes are horendous. Need to fix the high poly for those. I am starting on the top (head) and working my way down. Will get to the toes last.

About her blue under pants, it's just a flat color I added in photoshop. It took two seconds. Haven't worked on the pants yet.

[butt_sahib]

OH man this is sweet.
The model looks very "Fred-y" lol

I think you should/could add just another edge on that ear there. Its abit too sharp a curve imo.
I think that pink is way too bright/distracting XD
ALso, how'd you do that cloht on the feet? I making somehting similar adn would appreciate some tips :P
SHow me wireframe :P

Excellent work. Looking forward to them updates

[miezis]

well, her neck seems a bit too long, although you've concealed it well enough to go unnoticed.
the face looks beautiful and very true to original, though i must agree with butt_sahib about the ear.
the resolution of that jacket texture-space wise looks a bit small, or is it just me?
the fingers are looking a bit too knuckly [as in knuckles] for a female,
and also thinner ankles and fuller upper legs would only benefit her as woman!

[Chasarsis]

If you have polygons to spare, you might consider using some alpha planes to add some fur to the cuffs and trim of her jacket, even if its only a few just to break up the straight lines of the silhouette in those areas.
Its really cool too, I especially love her extra long hair . . . and that you're finishing it

[Tweaker]

FredH WOHOO!

Good stuff man, I think some small spots need a de-saturation brush but I think the over all colors need to be toned down and try a different kind of lighting I see to mush contrast in most renders "less is more" maybe in this case.

anyway great work, want to see updates

[b1ll]

FLAT TOP ahAHAHAHAH. Aw man, Alpha this baby up properly... I want to see good alpha hair. I STILL HAVE HOPE that SOME can do it... VERY FEW CAN!

lol. FUn project!

[FredH]

Hey, thanks guys. Really appriciated. I fixed most of the issues you suggested. For lighting and posing, I won't work on those until I start the final presentation, so for now, it's just some crappy lights with a default pose.

Fixes:
- Fixed Jacket resolution and details
- Modified hair (better?)
- Narrowed legs
- Added small highlights to the pants
- desaturated her colors a bit
- Added logo patch to her upper arms
- removed pink toe and finger nails
- made fingers less knuckly
- and other stuff

[FredH]

butt_sahib --> Here is the low res wire. The fur bits on the feet and the foot cloth sections are normal mapped, so I am not sure how usefull the wire frames are.

[Tweaker]

nice lowres FredH the toes on the normal map almost had me fooled. I like the updated hair better, definitely more convincing now. The fur on her coat looks kind of squire though.

all and all great work