Walrus - Your work is great as usual. And I agree with Fred about it being too clean. I would suggest to add in some rubble, battle marks; such as burns, scratches, indents and whatever else that can happen between these two characters! I know the main focus is your chracters here but I think little details in the foreground and background would help create and liven up the scene. Like her flame spell, it would probably make marks around the area if she tried to use it on him before, or is this their first strike?