Dominance War V - 2D- Beelow-Telekron-Seikoshia: God of Time

[beelow]

Gintonio- Thanks man. Sorry for late response. It's been a hectic week.

Tommy Scott- Thanks Tommy. Waiting to see what you do next man. Keep rocking yours out.:thumb:

The latest on this one. I still have plenty of work to do. Not sure if I want to keep skulls. Would like to hear some thoughts.

[talonhawk]

I like the skulls one thing I think that should be changed is on the left side there are two people falliing in the background they are almost parallel to each other I would change that my eyes goes to that area and also mobility but I mean thats hard to portray I could imagine. It looks really good I like this one way better then your other attempts

[elartwyne17]

wow awesome

[walrus]

Now that's some dramatic perspective, which really provides a lot of scale. Nice work! I like the skulls because they indicate aging. But if you like the idea of using three, what if instead of three skulls - which don't say anything more than one skull would - you show a baby head, a man's or woman's head, and a skull together?

And once you're showing an analog clock face and hourglasses, why not put a digital readout somewhere? Just kidding!

Anyhow, nice work so far. Good luck! :thumb:

[Agreus]

I love all your concept work and colors studies! I really enjoy the foreground character almost disintegrating and the background characters dissipating in some sort of time rift...very cool, cant wait to see more progress!

My Dominance War Entry: http://www.gameartisans.org/forums/s...ad.php?t=20397

[Razvan-Sedekiah]

Beautiful painting!

[kalemenev]

powerfully did it! beautiful! nice color

[beelow]

talonhawk- Made some changes thanks man!

elartwyne17-Thanks!

walrus- I couldn't figure out what you were saying at first. Now I get it, LOL. If time allows I will do it to see how it looks. XD I will see what I can do. Sounds like a cool idea. Just didn't like floating skulls there, I fixed up a bit with the hands holding up, I feel better about them now. You're always full of ideas. I was thinking that too, funny that you said that about the digital Readout, LOL.

Agreus-Thanks you sir.

Razvan-Sedekiah-Thanks, I gotta see what you are up to now. Been away too long. XD

kalemenev- Thanks, trying to find ways of making it better. XD

Here is another update, getting close to about done. Let me know what you all think.

[rickardwestman]

Looks great! Very cool design and sweet use of the logo, nice touch! Maybe if you could find a way to portray scale a bit more, to give us more reference elements to actually see how big he is. My only thought. Still, great stuff, looking forward to seeing this finished!

[beelow]

rickardwestman- Thanks for the crit man, unfortunately I ran out of time, and couldn't finish.


Sorry guys, some important things came up. Am I still able to submit. I know that was in the rules. I just have to finish up my turnarounds. Everything else is ready. Great stuff everyone. I still have to check what everyone else has throughout, some amazing stuff. Not sure if it is even worth posting my stuff now.

[rickardwestman]

Hey man, finish it! I love the design of it and it will, no matter dw, be a great portfolio piece. Sorry to hear that you couldn't finish on time but you should still be able to submit. Just finish up those turnarounds Cause even if you have lost some votes you will still have the exposure that comes with entering a contest like this, and you will have a cool illustration with turnarounds to go with it to put in your portfolio.
Looking forward to see this finished and entered! :thumb: