Comicon 2011 | Dante_Cyber | Cyber Shreder

[Dante_Cyber]

Here are some painted glow) and decided to make Schroeder laser spikes, reflexes, clean up later) as you guys so come down? or more schto then add or change?

sarakava time unfortunately very few) that have time to do something)

[ambitious_nomad]

I am a long time TMNT fan. I got to say I hate the Shredder but you know... In the way you are suppose to hate him. Your art is looking good just keep polishing it up.

[Dante_Cyber]

ambitious_nomad
did not quite understand written, due to the fact that he could not properly translate text from English into Russian), but exactly thanks = D

[mansarali]

Looking a lot better, maybe add some neon details on the belt armour or something. check these for high tech armour from halo series: http://mydisguises.com/wp-content/up...halo-elite.jpg
http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__...li_General.png

[Dante_Cyber]

mansarali thank you) for his advice) but now I have no imagination, I do not know what I come up with design

[Dante_Cyber]

wondering which version is right for spikes

[SintoRisky]

Wow) Shredder interesting concept :thumb:
I think it a necessary to work over clearness of drawing... a little
Good luck ; )

[Lando_Mange]

Lookin' good man, I really like the concept for #4 on the spieks there. Just sharpening the idea a bit but it felt really "shredding" :P

[Gyorkland]

looking good man those lights are getting you near the cyber feeling but I thik I´ve spotted another issue that makes it still feel a little medieval, the cape and the waist thingie are all ragged and simple, try adding some design on them and don´t make them ragged something like in layers to make it feel high tech, ohh and the belt also needs a little more design it feels like a big rough piece of metal like it was made by a blacksmith, the same goes for the armour below the belt those two big pieces in the side of the legs, anyway keep it up man you still have like two weeks.

[Dante_Cyber]

SintoRisky Thank you, oh my little old tablet for clear lines of (but I will try as best as possible


Lando_Mange well), then I'll work through the blades as laser in the fourth embodiment

Gyorkland Ah yes! and most do not like this design) need to think, make a couple of sketches and redraw the belt)

Thank you for your attention

[mansarali]

I think number 4 spikes style with sharp clean edge shape, like number 2. As this will give its cyber blade feel. Also agree with Gyorkland as I think I mentioned this also before

[Dante_Cyber]

mansarali I do not have too much experience in nano-technology) will do everything possible

[elxaoc]

i like what is going on. Nice progress. Color of the light makes the atmosphere. As for me this work is near to be finished.
I can suggest you to pay attention on his forearms and wrists. If you mentally will delete armor its appeared that they are too thin - imo. Armour looking heavy - its good, but it must makes him more massive in silhouette, i suppose.

[Dante_Cyber]

elxaoc hand was made ​​entirely of metal, =) but I think yes, it is necessary to simplify some things

[Dante_Cyber]

little refined, had heard that sort of moved the deadline, do not tell until what date?

[Dante_Cyber]

think? it be better if we apply the blur effect to work?

[axelalonso]

I like your source light !!! ^_^! as for blur effects ... on the bg maybe! since the values n your BG seem a bit to close from the main object ...also check out a bit the insides of the cape has way to much shadow for all that light hitting! try to make a lost and found technique there ^_^ ! you know like when you draw in a black paper? and you add hints of some highlight of the shape! But overall it ´s a nice piece of art! :thumb:

[Dante_Cyber]

axelalonso thanks for the nice comment and criticism,

Completion date moved?

[axelalonso]

axelalonso thanks for the nice comment and criticism,

Completion date moved?

yes for October 3 rd isn't that great!! one more week!!!

[Dante_Cyber]

axelalonso thanks for the info) I hope not too lazy for that time should be refined as design, not to mention the board