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  1. Saffronia's Avatar
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    Fatish Oldish Guy

    I was gonna entre the GTA4 Mini comp but i'm too busy (plus I'm restricting myself to making heads atm). Heres the guy I was working on the other day, dunno if i'll finish him.


    Comments would be cool, cheers

    Saff
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  2. benclark is offline
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    I think you have neglected the eyes and nose a little bit.

    The eyes look like they are just smoothed versions of the low poly, there is no sign of the eyelids at all or any of the smaller crease detail around that area, you have put in some crows feet and basic facial wrinkles but you havent really refined them or made them blend with the surrounding flesh

    I think the nose just needs more refining too, the nasolabial fold starts from nowhere because the nostrils are too blobby.

    I like the whole mouth/chin area though thats really nice, I think your sculpt would be helped if you bulked up the neck and shoulders too, looks like a fattish head on a really slender body
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  3. Saffronia's Avatar
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    Thanks for the comments man, much appreciated. I hadn't seriously approched the eyes, guess I'll concentrate on them next. Deffo see what your saying about the nose and neck too.

    Cheers
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  4. Saffronia's Avatar
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    Did a little more
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  5. Mattimusss's Avatar
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    i like the update allot. but yeah, the top of the ear needs some work. over all, good facial structure.
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