Dominance War IV - 2D - Vesta - Brigit

[Ksan]

I also like 1 and 4. I think the arch of the back is more natural in 4. Maybe straighten out the right leg just a tad? Just a thought. They look nice, great job working through it! :thumb:

[Vesta]

Oh, thank you, Ksan! I will think about it.

[Vesta]

At last I have a desicion about her final pose :

and at the same time I am working with her modeling.

[Razvan-Sedekiah]

EDIT- Wow.. some how I got stuck in time and only saw your choices a moment ago... oh well.. looks like you liked 4 too! XD
I hope these notes are still of some use!

I love your character! So pretty! ^___^

I like 4.
sorry to write on your pic but I'm running out of time and this is the fastest way I can communicate.

Thoughts on 4:
I think her head could look down more to follow the slant of the arrow.
I like the diagonal on the arrow, diagonals are almost always interesting.
I don't think the perspective would be forced so far on the back leg.
Her back/left breast feels a little too high and I would like to see it stick out a little as a shape, especially because of how her body is turned.
I messed around with her arm.. because the anatomy/perspective felt off, but I don't think I got any closer to making it look right, sorry.


Bow design looks great and her hair is fabulous!

Keep up the sexy, curvy work!

[Vesta]

Razvan-Sedekiah, if I would can I would hug you! Big thanks for comments! As I understood that sometime, when I am working with one image for a long time. I do not notice some thing that other person can notice. Big thanks for scetches, they are right and I will make some edits.

[walrus]

When I first looked at the four choices, I didn't realize that the hair was different, as I was mostly focused on the legs. But now that you've started blocking in colors, I have to say I really love the fuller, thicker hair - it balances the weight of her bottom half really well in a way that the others didn't. :thumb:

also - like R-S's changes to her right arm.

Looking good - keep going!

[Vesta]

Thanks, walrus.
You helped me very much in finding pose for her legs. and now I am glad by result. :thumb:

[Vesta]

Hi guys! Could somebody remind me-- what dead-line date is for final work?

[Razvan-Sedekiah]

11:59 p.m Eastern Time, Monday, May 11th, 2009

But I would send it in on the 9th... or sooner if you can.

[Vesta]

Thank you, Razvan-Sedekiah
I will be in a hurry.

[Vesta]

Thinking about concept sheet, I began to find the style for realization of this work part.
I remind you, that she is a Clericon in any case! ;-)

[Razvan-Sedekiah]

Nice! I love the paper you picked for the concept sheet and the cool swirly pattern.

[Vesta]

Thanks, Razvan-Sedekiah
I am going to have for my final concept sheet something like that.



I am not sure about quantity of the skethes... may be less?

[Vesta]

Guys!
I wanted to make a Clericon, but....but...
There is a thought of one of my friend, that I made Stalker, not Clericon.
Is it possible to have a Clericon with the weapon I draw?
I know, that most of my sketches show her as a warrior, but I thougt to show how she can defend herself. I told you all that the arrow she has are medicine and the bow that she uses is medicin also.

She gave a medicine energy with this bow and he can get the person who needs help with arrows.

I can not be agree that she can be Stalker.. She is Clericon!

What do you think about her?
( p.s. I hope you will understand my English)

[Vesta]

Composition for illustration.

[Vesta]

or.... like this ?

[Razvan-Sedekiah]

I like the wider one better. It feels grander to me...
Maybe some kinda low detail, faded mountains farther back?
(only drawn in a more pleasing more interesting shape that the one I just drew.)

[Vesta]

Razvan-Sedekiah, thank you for advices!

[Vesta]

My final modeling and concept sheets.
Comments, edits, notices, any critics are welcomed!

[Vesta]

Hi! I`ve just wanted to say all of them, guys...
I am proud to take a part at this comp. Now, when the deadline is coming, I saw a lot of great works from many artists.
You are fantastic and I understood, that it`s really possible to get the highest in the Art.
I wish you all good luck and I am glad that everyone here is glad to draw his own concept art. I will come back soon to say my final words, but now I would like to say -- you are the best and big THANKS all who helped me by advice and just suggestion!